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I like it okay and I think this could be reworked a bit into something really awesome, but there are some things about it that put me off. I understand if you are going for a certain style or something, but in my opinion, you need to be careful that you don't lose rhythm and flow for too long for the sake of style.

The biggest area I took issue with was around 0:30-1:10. With the instrument on its own, it was hard to get into the song as the rhythm was hard for me to follow. When using a solo instrument you need to either keep a steady rhythm or keep the out-of-rhythm section brief.

Again, it's just my opinion; take it with a grain of salt.

hammytechnoid responds:

Thank you for your constructive comments. I plan on a reworked re-release with some changes in length and maybe some highlights added. Thanks again.

I have great respect for those who dare to mix genres together, and even more for those who manage to pull it off well. Every instrument fits together nicely and to top it off, the vocals sound great with it too.

Big props to you and happy experimenting!

You definitely achieved what your description depicted. It wasn't too repetitive and kept me interested. Mechanical sounds were great and well placed and I thought the drop was excellent at continuing the theme of gears, springs, and gizmos.

Quite a charming tune.

For 'screwing around' toward the end, it sounded pretty good! Cool sounds and nice wobbles. Perhaps not my favorite sequence of notes in some areas, but I am a picky listener.

Theledge93 responds:

haha Thank you! it is a sort of odd progression, but i really liked how it managed to stay musical through all of the variations.

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