I like it okay and I think this could be reworked a bit into something really awesome, but there are some things about it that put me off. I understand if you are going for a certain style or something, but in my opinion, you need to be careful that you don't lose rhythm and flow for too long for the sake of style.
The biggest area I took issue with was around 0:30-1:10. With the instrument on its own, it was hard to get into the song as the rhythm was hard for me to follow. When using a solo instrument you need to either keep a steady rhythm or keep the out-of-rhythm section brief.
Again, it's just my opinion; take it with a grain of salt.